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Let... ME OUT. - by Elobo

Let... ME OUT.




[ebff2011] Despoiled sac of bloat, frothing behemoth writhing in the decay below. Sealed in, captive of the pulsating energy of earth. Contagious wretch, held in invisible magnetic bonds. It soaked them. I grew to hate them and depend on them. And then they were released. Stolen. Its power and its prison. Its inhibitor. Its spawn grew larger and more violent. And its anger swelled in propensity. Too large now to fit through the holes to the pristine world above, it hews its cage away without effort. Great chunks of stone and metal tossed aside, difficulty a foreign notion. All of the filth spilled into the underworld is about to bubble up and rot away the surface. Imbibed in the pestilence of the Rat's wake.



Other Submissions by Elobo

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Elobo Sunshine In the Forest Page 30
SunshineForest - #31
And we're approaching resolution at this point. I'm kind of a fanboy of Morton so even though Bushie is having a brilliant time, I am invariably drawn to him. Anyways, I think this page accomplishes what it was supposed to. The others are getting curious of Bushie fraternizing with the Big Bad Drago.
7/16/09 0.00
Elobo Sunshine In the Forest Page 31
SunshineForest - #32
Anyways folks, thanks for taking a looksee at this book. It was a spontaneous idea that I had to get down on paper before it left me. So I had a lot of it ready before I began any work. I love a lot of media like this so it reflects on a number of sources. In the end, it's not quite so dark at all. I know the subject matter is meant for kids, but I hope you've enjoyed our little romp.
7/16/09 0.00
Elobo Sunshine In the Forest Page 4
SunshineForest - #05
The Ramblin' Mushroom here does not factor into the story, so he has not been brought to full attention. This technique also lets me populate the Forest with other creatures without stuffing them down someone's throat. It shows that other stories are unfolding all around this one, and a kid can extrapolate the stories themselves. I think this benefits a story that otherwise directs you from beginning to end.
7/16/09 0.00
Elobo Sunshine In the Forest Page 5
SunshineForest - #06
Uh oh, what's all this then? There are a few hooks like this that will have later consequences. Though there is an overarching plot there are a few lessons along the way.
7/16/09 0.00
Elobo Sunshine In the Forest Page 6
SunshineForest - #07
There are a few wordy pages in this books, ie: betwixt. I firmly believe that the audience shouldn't be patronized. Kids should ask questions about stories regardless, so some vocabulary thrown into the mix can't hurt.
7/16/09 0.00

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